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» Poem: me...
me...
written by devil-dick
03:07 AM 8/11/04
this time for me is hard.
but none shall see.
the secrets i hide.
my deep misery.
so here me now.
whilst im still here.
for i feel,my friends.
my time is near.
i have constantly fought.
forever more i shall fight.
my life this time is getting harder.
i try to stay, using all my might.
but the pain is hurting.
there is just to much to bare.
i resist as much as i can.
the burden isnt to share.
in this life i am alone.
what reason is there to keep.
my life, my pain, mine alone.
if i die who shall weep?
howlong would i linger,
at th front of your mind.
is there a start i can find?
hear me now, help me please.
be with me through dangerous time.
help me fight this killing disease.
i need a friend, someone for me.
someone to help me through.
i need more courage, the will to fight.
make me safe, someone new.
help me take my troubles away.
help me see the brightened sky.
help me lift this viel of darkness.
the pain i have, isnt a lie.
attention seeking i am not.
health and my safety i long to keep.
before the Grim himself, has one more to reap.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is about me, in my current situation. what i keep inside only eats away. might as well share some of what i need. no harm in that is there?

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» Comments / Feedback
by SuperBob (8-11-2004 - 03:40 AM)
no harm at all in that....your poem is really good...powerful...i could feel the emotions...maybe i'm just biased ecause i've been there myself..but still i enjoyed the work...

by (anonymous) (8-12-2004 - 02:49 PM)
i liked this one^.^

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