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» Poem: old mcdonold gone wrong
old mcdonold gone wrong
written by devil-dick
07:25 AM 8/11/04
old mcdonold shot his wife, right between her eyes.
with a bang bang here, a bang bang there.
here a bang, there a bang, everywhere a bang bang.
old mcdonold shot his wife, right between her eyes.

after that he fucked the bitch, in her tight snatch.
with a squelch squelch here, a squelch squelch there.
here a squelch, there a squelch, everywhere a squelch squelch.
old mcdonold fucked the bitch, in her tight snatch.

after that he burnt the bitch, in his wooden barn.
witha crackle crackle here, a crackle crackle there.
here a crackle, there crackle, everywhere a crackle crackle.
after that he burnt the bitch, in his wooden barn.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
what you lot think? i say its crap..

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» Comments / Feedback
by neverXexhale (8-11-2004 - 07:26 AM)
holy shit

by (anonymous) (8-11-2004 - 07:32 AM)
lmmfao babie that is just fucked up

by Genocide Reaper (8-11-2004 - 07:38 AM)
I'm laughing my fucking ass off. I can see the whole thing in my head. its a FUCKING HELLACIOUS COMIC SONG! I LOVE IT! LMMFAO

by Sharrain (8-17-2004 - 02:42 AM)
hun, that is sick! i opened it to show a friend how good your writting is and she looked at me in shock!

by The grey raven (10-2-2004 - 07:37 PM)
hahahahahahaha! ur poetry rocks!!!!!!!

by (anonymous) (10-26-2004 - 10:20 PM)
sick yet odly funny lol

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