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Foolish game
written by Trapezium11:58 AM 8/11/04I played such a foolish game,
I tryed to take my life once again,
And i stayed alive,
Just a slight wince of pain.
Why did i ever want to die,
I have something to live for i do,
I'll live for Rosie and that is all,
I will live for you. |
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really crap short poem... too much flying through my head i just can't get anything out
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| » Comments / Feedback | by i_love_sandy (8-11-2004 - 04:10 PM)
| yeah....that makes me real sad you heartbreaker. I bet if I die u wont care... you only care about her
you dont care about ur girlfriend |
by SuperBob (8-11-2004 - 09:08 PM)
| to i_love_sandy: i know its not really my place...but stop trying to make him feel bad..be glad he still alive
kahno: it might have been a short poem but it got to the point, no metaphorical beating around the bushes, that was really well written showcasing your skills of very nicely...good work, very beautiful |
by Trapezium (8-12-2004 - 12:12 PM)
| meh... if anyone i know dies i'll cry myself to sleep... especially you... you're still a great person just because i dumped you that doens't make you nay worse |
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