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» Poem: WICKED
WICKED
written by Trapezium
03:18 PM 8/11/04
My tears fall to the floor,
One by one they hit the surface,
My love has let me down once more,
It seems she's filled with malice.

She told me i was selfish,
She told me i fucked up her life,
She's a girl i'll really miss,
So please hand me a knife.

I was told it's emotional blackmail,
My feelings for her have a name?
So beautiful and so frail,
Now i'm covered in shame.

When i tried to die,
Maybe deep down i knew
I knew it'd be a lie,
M heart is like a boiling stew.

I put the blade in my back,
It slowly rips the skin,
Love is something i lack,
So i replace it with sin.

The blood doesn't come,
No matter how deep i go,
All over my back for fun,
No blood trickle not even slow.

I do this because i'm upset,
Of what i've down to her,
I knew she'd like the rest,
I knew i'm not what she'd prefer.

My cure is so close now,
But I just can't grasp it,
How do i take it how?
My death'll stop me from this shit.

I know how to make a noose,
Make it right for once,
It can't be too tight and not too loose,
I may not be a dunce.

Tie it to my window,
And then i will jump out,
If the noose don't blow,
Then i definately wont shoot.

I'll be dead at least,
No more reminisncing,
No more thoughts of past,
No more girls i'm kissing.

No short relationships,
Nothing seems to last,
It's all over too quick,
It flies by too fast.

But my life it drags on slowly,
A minute seems a year,
I just feel so lonely,
And everything strikes fear.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
In my opinion this is the best poem i've wrote so far... it covers most of my emotions and a little of my past... please comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by i_love_sandy (8-11-2004 - 04:19 PM)
yeah...dont kill urself. I know this is about rosie. again:(. well I cant blame you...u loved her.:(. its me who should die....not you...me, ur girlfriend...I should die.

by SuperBob (8-12-2004 - 02:23 AM)
wow...that is beautiful...incredible...inspiring...puts me in complete awe....your talent shines so much in this one...no wonder you see it as the best poem you've written...esily one of the best i've read...*applauds and cheers*

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