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» Poem: 'noobs'
'noobs'
written by devil-dick
01:17 AM 8/12/04
newbie's are new.
we all dont have a clue.
we all just try to fit in.
even though we come across dim.
we all have made a mistake.
so why do you bother to piss take.
help us along, teach us the way.
dont be big headed, be nice and say.
you was once a noob, as were we all.
we all might fail, we all might fall.
dont keep us down, help us up.
teach and show, learn a pup.
we are all one, but to each his own.
be helpful, let it be shown.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
its not our fault were new. u was once. mistakes or no mistakes, we all gota learn. dont push us down because of it.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Misery (8-12-2004 - 04:19 AM)
well..the message is true...

by Sharrain (8-17-2004 - 02:44 AM)
finally someone else sees the trusth!

by The grey raven (9-27-2004 - 06:46 PM)
I can relate to this, I'm kinda new

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