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nightmares fate
written by devil-dick01:20 AM 8/16/04its 11:36, i lay down to rest.
my exhorsting day, was the best.
my eyes are weary, sleep is quick
my daily candle has burnt out the wick.
the dream i had, started good.
by the end, i dreamt of blood.
a peaceful dream, turned into hell.
a dark dank pit, an evil well.
the souls are evil, they tear my flesh.
they tear away my skin like paper mesh.
i see my blood, as my skin, there peeling.
my muscle exposed, im sent back reeling.
my arm is limp, in this dream so dark.
i dreamt of blood,was that the spark?
the pain, im sure, would make me wake.
before my blood has driped, to form a lake.
i see the devil, i glimpse his face.
in his hand, he grips a mace.
he swings it hard, out sprays blood.
my face it hit, i knew it would.
it knocks me back, im sure to die.
then i wake, in blood i lie.
my dream was scary, it seemed so real.
all the pain, i could still feel.
so there i lay, on my bloody bed.
the bleeding, it comes from my head.
my dream, was true, the pain was i felt.
now in hell, my soul begins to melt. |
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its my poem, sorry if i repeat blood, but its my work, il write how and what i want. still tell me what you think tho please [ View devil-dick's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 414 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Sharrain (8-16-2004 - 06:40 AM)
hey aiden its awesome! keep writting what you want not what others want! |
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