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the garden
written by devil-dick01:59 AM 8/16/04the garden is my safety.
it takes all my troubles away.
i thank the person who helped me.
for creating a place that makes me okay.
she helped me out, more than the rest.
she was sweet and calm, loving and kind.
the garden is heaven. with trees so green.
a place so nice, it clears your worried mind.
a clear night sky, shrouded in stars.
a warm blowing wind, as i lay in the dark.
this peaceful place, i love so much.
as it takes my mind, of the urge to mark.
the fields so green, needs more care.
it needs the feeling she help me give.
this world is my life, growing old and rots.
please help me make this place once more live.
do what you did, that re-memorable night.
lay here with me, on this spread out sheet.
i thourght this was our secret place.
where only we could meet.
but to me it seems, you have lost the key.
this place so nice, is growing even more grey
you have my feelings, let them guide you.
remember our path, next time dont sway.
stay with me and help me cope.
build this world, make it new.
be here please, i ask you now.
come close to me, guide me through.
you helped me before. so i ask you again.
we layed here remember, during my time of need.
keep this garden living like it once did.
help me keep back the killing weed. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dedicate this poem to chrissy, the only person who has made me feel safe and happy just by bein with me in heaven. that is a true friend, she has been the only one to help me through this very hard time in my life. if i could choose to have one wish. it would be that this garden was real.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (8-16-2004 - 02:57 AM)
| i loved it!!.your so good at these..please keep writing more...-sydney |
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