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First Heartbreak
written by liddle xxx punk04:01 AM 8/16/04It finally happened
I fell for him and
allowed him my heart
I gave it to him
and he threw it back
it hit me like a bullet
not only in my chest but also in my head
I will never forget the way he made me feel
and how fast he grew on me
i was happy for a while
but i got in to deep
before i had something solid
and now i sit and think
about my first heartbreak |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I fell head over heels for a guy and I've never felt like that about anyone...I thought that i would have a relationship that finally had a meaning but i was wrong..The guy said that he couldnt commit to me becauce when he was around girls his dick talked for him and he cared to much about me to break my heart...So now me and him are trying to hold our friendship together.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (8-16-2004 - 04:25 AM)
| This is one of my favorite poems you've written. I really hope things work out with you two. I guess it's best you two aren't in a real serious relationship because we're too young for all that now. But I'm real happy these poems are working out for you so well. Keep writing.
erika. |
by _acceptable_loss_ (12-11-2004 - 08:30 PM)
| i like your poem. . i can really relate. . keep writing |
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