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» Poem: i said please!
i said please!
written by Trapezium
11:41 AM 8/16/04
I just want to waste away,
Run away from this blackened day,

Let the thoughts just disappear,
Let my life stop being my fear,

Please just kill me before my thoughts do,
Remind yourself this could be you,

You wouldn't want to live anymore,
So way keep me feeling sore?

Pierce my skin with a needle or knife,
Slash my throat and end this life,

Turn me into a rotting dead,
Get rid of these thoughts i dread,

Leave me in a backstreet alley,
Set my spirit free.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
suicidla again... but i know i wont die... so i want a gun or a surefire way of knowing i'll die... i want someone to murder me

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» Comments / Feedback
by i_love_sandy (8-16-2004 - 03:00 PM)
damn sanday I know how u feel! I want someone to murder me! I know who will do it and I am gonna call her today. she will say yes...she wants me to die.

by i_love_sandy (8-16-2004 - 09:08 PM)
I love your poetry. keep it up hun*huggles*

by insane_angel (8-17-2004 - 08:36 AM)
spiffy

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