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» Poem: you do this to me
you do this to me
written by Xx brOken xX
05:16 PM 8/16/04
i day dream about your smile
the look in your eyes
i get distracted by it.
i cant concentrate on my work
. . .you do this to me

you kissed me goodnight
and for the rest of that night
i had a huge smile on my face
i kept thinking about that kiss
the way it made me melt
. . .you do this to me

you held me tight
i felt like nothing could harm me
all my fears went away
and i finally felt free
. . .you do this to me

we started to drift
you started talking to someone else
i started going crazy
i couldn't sleep
i kept tossing and turning
. . .you do this to me

tears are falling
blood from my wrist is dripping
i feel the pain in my arm
i now know that this is real
that you really did leave me
i want to die
. . .you do this to me. . . .


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by BabyBubbles (8-21-2004 - 05:19 PM)
sounds exactly how i feel... very good.

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