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» Poem: because of you
because of you
written by Xx brOken xX
11:40 PM 8/18/04
these cuts
these scars
these bruises
they're all from you

this broken heart
this frown upon my face
this depressed attitude
its all because of you

the tears
the screams
the ripped pictures
they're all because of you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
yet, another bad poem. . .sryz

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (8-18-2004 - 11:53 PM)
i thought that was awesome.

by DarkAngelBlood (8-19-2004 - 01:16 AM)
it was a good poem, but no one can make you do anything, unless they physically did that to you...

by nightmareforyou (10-28-2004 - 01:20 AM)
i love that poem...i love all the work you have done....

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