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» Poem: i died
i died
written by Sharrain
08:05 AM 8/19/04
i see all my old friends, family and aquantaces rushing forwards and burst into tears. i'v missed them all so much. i hug them all and then i hear a little whisper in my head. it calls my name and cries for hope. the voice is my best friends and i try to see her in the muddle of smiles warm and welcome but she isnt there. the voice gets more distant more i feel at home. suddenly i feel so scared. i know why i missed these people so much. my nanna who died before i was born i suddenly know and love, my brother whos funeral i only just attended hold my hand telling me to let go. but the voice is getting louder. i want to reach out to it and more voices join in. now my sisters voice is there crying and a few of my other friends voice miz into the confusion. i know i want to stay here, the pain will go if i wish it to. all my old loves begin to fade as i feel my new ones getting closer. i cry as i feel a jolt, it pulls me back to life. i feel another hand sitting right above my heart. i feel myself in a mans arms as i am carried to the car. my eyes open to see him there, i know no matter how hard life is, who i loose or what happens i can get through it, my friends, family and even people i dont know will be there to pull me through. to make me feel their love.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dont know why i wrote this but i was in one of those moods. please comment if you have been bothered to read it all!

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by insane_angel (8-19-2004 - 09:00 AM)

by insane_angel (8-19-2004 - 09:01 AM)
i really like that poem.....its sad but its good

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