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» Poem: Let me go
Let me go
written by Norway_babe
05:43 PM 8/20/04
Freedom..
I want to feel my freedom
I want to fly in the sky
I fly up high
But I can't
You keep me in a cage
My freedom is locked in a safe
And me in a cage
I'm not more precious than othe people in this world.
So stop treat me like I was
Stop letting me down
Stop and let me go!
I love you so
But this tears my apart
From my soul
And mind
If you love me so
Let me go
I want to feel freedom
I don't want to be owned by anyone
I want to own myself


So if you love me so,
Let me go


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
A poem that describes my feelings.. It's for my dad...

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by Trapezium (9-19-2004 - 01:56 PM)
If I could I'd kill your dad... and take back everything bad he's done towards you... sorry I can't

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