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» Poem: Down
Down
written by DarkAngelBlood
08:36 PM 8/20/04
What are you holding onto?
What is she going to do for you?
She'll just end up letting you down
So let it go
You've got no control
She feels more free than ever before
She doesn't need to hang around anymore
But little does she know
She's trapped again
I doubt she'll make it out in the end
Does she know the word sacrifice?
It's an idea that may save her life.
She's been victimized
And there's no going back
You said your goodbyes
What does she think about that?
She doesn't care
Sorry to say
She won't be there
It's never gonna go your way
She's got her new friend
And even though it hurts so bad
You've got me in the end
And you know I won't make you sad


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» Comments / Feedback
by Darkwolfgirl (8-20-2004 - 09:39 PM)
awesome poem.

by Bloodytears (8-26-2004 - 01:03 AM)
i love your poems all of them well the ones i have read i dident leave comments on any but this one because this was the first one of yours i read and i wanted to leave a comment only on this one well ya ness bye

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