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» Poem: why should i care??
why should i care??
written by Xx brOken xX
10:59 PM 8/20/04
i let you go
so why am i looking back on you?
you've walked away
you were so hurt

but i didnt really care
all i thought about was myself
i liked you alot
but there was just something i was scared of

im always asking about you
im always wondering about you
and thinking about you
i wonder if i ever cross your mind any more

i look in your profile
theres a girls name
i dont know who she is
or what shes like

for some reason
when i read that name
it was like a bullet hitting my heart
it hurt soo fucking bad

but why??
why did it hurt!?
i could of had you
you were mine.

but i let you go
knowing that i was hurting you
and knowing that you liked me so much too

why should i care if your with another girl?
but i do
i hate this feeling
i wish it would just go away.

i hope she treats you better than i did
i hope shes what you wanted
i hope you like her as much as you liked me
im happy for you
but this still hurts.. . . .


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
a personal poem - - uhh why do i care!? i have a guy that i absolutely love.. so why the hell do i care if he's with some1 else!!!??? i hate this feeling. . it sucks :(

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» Comments / Feedback
by BabyBubbles (8-20-2004 - 11:20 PM)
OMG... i relate totally... i am goin throught the same thing at this very exact moment...very good keep it up....

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