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Blade
written by SilentScreamsofDeath08:41 PM 8/22/04Seven layers of skin
Hair follicles
Scattered sweat glands
Fat cells.
Half-domes of congealing liquid
over the film of oil and sweat.
spider veins become filaments
ink for the blade's nib
inarticulate soliloquies
deep borings belong on shoulders
and knees
shallow rifts on inner thigh
or parallel to stretch marks
of the hips.
scars must never be left
on forearms. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dumb_blonde (8-23-2004 - 08:54 AM)
| i think this is a very good poem but i couldnt tell you because there was so many big words in there i really couldn't understand it honestly
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by TearzOfBlood (12-25-2004 - 01:51 AM)
| ohhhh thats really good how could you not fucking get it honestly fucking whore^^ well i really like it i lov your poems |
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