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first day suicide
written by deadrebel53
03:01 AM 8/23/04
u walk into the building.
u notice all the different groups.
the jocks, the preps, the popular people,
the druggies and stoners, the band freaks,
the rockers punks and goths,
and the people that don't give a shit about you.
your standing there wondering
"where are all the people that are going to
blow there brains out or shoot up the school?
that's where i belong, but there not here."
u take out a gun from your backpack
and place it to your head.
u shoot
and fall to the floor.
no one notices who's dead.
all the notice and care about is
the white tile that is now
blood red.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i couldnt have actually done this because we already had our first day of school....

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» Comments / Feedback
by Darkwolfgirl (8-23-2004 - 03:13 AM)
wow. i don't start school till wednesday. awesome poem.

by neverXexhale (8-23-2004 - 11:58 PM)
i dont start school till monday...

by neverXexhale (8-24-2004 - 12:00 AM)
i dont start school till monday...

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