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laughter to screams
written by Suicidal_tears01:14 AM 8/25/04i sat n cried,
so alone i lived,
n alone ill die,
smiles turn to tears,
laughter came to screams,
the blade flicked my wrist,
blood drips down my hand,
this time ull relize,
by mylsef i sat n cried,
this time ill die,
ill let life pass me by. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by TRADDS_LIL_SIS (8-25-2004 - 01:16 AM)
i like, i like a lot.
i often feel as though the lines above are my reality. |
by Darkwolfgirl (8-25-2004 - 03:20 AM)
sweet. i feel like that so much, it's not even funny. |
by liddle xxx punk (8-29-2004 - 09:27 PM)
this is a really good poem...
i've felt like that before.. |
by DontFearAConcequence (8-30-2004 - 06:10 AM)
-applauds- thats a great poem..i can relate..sad how i can ssay that to so many poems on here..i really like it..i like yuor style of poetry! |
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