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6 questions for a loved one
written by Trapezium09:01 AM 8/27/04Sweet greetings die on my lips,
Crimson liquid drips,
Eyes glazed like ice,
Why did you take your life?
Your body is cold,
Your face looks old,
Hanging so lifeless,
Why did you go knifeless?
Gripping the blade,
My vision fades,
Tears blur my eyes,
Why live in the skies?
Now I know the time has come,
Pull the trigger on the gun,
You hung; I shoot,
Can you understand my beaut?
I lived for you,
I'll die for you,
I'll save you if i could,
Do you think i should?
The gun points up towards my jaw,
This was a never ending war,
With you i survived,
Why did you have to die? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I keep having horrible thoughts about Sarika dying... they're so vivid... she always dies the same way, in the same place... and i always find a gun... and the thought just disappears... and i'm filled with tears and fright... these thoughts are expressed in this rubbish poem
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Morbid Angel (8-27-2004 - 11:23 AM)
| Thats really deep, wow. I'm impressed :) |
by cryptic_misery (8-27-2004 - 06:16 PM)
| kahno i love it. i really really do. how is everything? haven't talked to you in a while. are you mad at me? i hope you still read my poems. comment any of my latest ones with how you are doing. |
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