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» Poem: its all fake
its all fake
written by Xx brOken xX
01:35 PM 8/27/04
sitting on my roof
just thinking about my life
the moon beaming down on me
the stars glistening against the dark sky
i hear the crickets chirping
an airplane in the distance
beams of light shinning in my face
as each car passes by
its such a beautiful night

suddenly all my thoughts are cleared
and im not worried about anything
now my head goes to one thing
...him...
god, how i like him so much
i gave him my everything
but it feels like he's just
dragging me along
like he doesn't really like me
that its all just a joke
that he's just pretending
its all fake
that hurts badly,
when you care about someone so much
and they just dont give a damn


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
another bad poem. . but comments are welcomed

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by ILLUSIONS (8-27-2004 - 01:39 PM)
wow i can reallly relate to that.......

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