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to my dad-
written by deadrebel5305:55 PM 8/29/04if u wouldve just not have gotten as mad as u did,
if u wouldve not yelled at us so much,
if u wouldve just left us alone,
nothing that i'm about to do wouldve
ever happened.
i wouldnt being trying to kill myself right now.
i wouldnt be having these thoughts.
i wouldnt be cutting myself.
i wouldnt be overdosing on pills.
i wouldnt have a gun pointed to my head about to pull the trigger.
but most of all,
i wouldnt be dead. |
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i'm beyond pissed at him right now
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| » Comments / Feedback | by death_by_suicide (8-29-2004 - 06:24 PM)
| very deep....very touching....nice poem...::claps:: |
by Xx brOken xX (8-29-2004 - 06:46 PM)
| i know exactly where you're coming from. i have alot of issues with my dad too. so i totally relate to your poem. good job. |
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