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consequences
written by devil-dick11:16 PM 8/29/04a man, five foot seven.
left out from heaven.
the reason being, he failed the test.
he surely was as good as the rest.
he did as he was told.
he was strong and also bold.
the trouble was, he hated life.
he shot his mum, and killed his wife.
he confessed his sins, and prayed each night.
just so his day, would lead to the heavenly flight.
but that it did, to show him he was wrong.
that praying only lasts for so long.
so now here he is, stood at its gate.
praying he can get in, he begins to wait.
then down he fell, to the place so black.
he lands hard, and with such a whack.
'welcome to hell, enjoy your stay'.
so, this is the only way.
so there he sits, the fires burning hot.
all because his wife and mum got shot.
so pick a path, and choose it wise.
even God can know all your little lies. |
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any idea's for a name for this poem anybody?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Wolf_ofthe_Shadows (8-30-2004 - 02:37 AM)
| Hi, This is an awesome poem...maybe you should call it consequences? |
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