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» Poem: across the neck
across the neck
written by Trapezium
11:01 AM 8/30/04
Deeper and deeper it goes,
Blade sinking into the skin,
Pressing as hard as I can,
Blood pouring out of a sick; twistid grin.

Across the neck blood gushing out,
Crimson liquid; will it be enough,
Or will I have to force it harder,
For that I must be tough.

You call me evil all the time,
You say i'm twisted every day,
I love debauchery,
And morbitity in every way.


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wow that was crap

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» Comments / Feedback
by Morbid Angel (8-30-2004 - 11:28 AM)
That wasn't crap, it was very...interesting :) well done hun xx

by Trapezium (8-30-2004 - 12:17 PM)
interesting is another word that means crap when you put it in front of dots

by linkinparkchica (8-30-2004 - 08:37 PM)
no comment...

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