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» Poem: TAKE ME
TAKE ME
written by whatShouldUsBe
11:06 PM 4/7/04
Take me now far away,
nothing more do I have to say,
all my life shrouded in fear,
all but that to me is clear,
One more step and I'll leap,
one more life for death to reap,
All my life I've been forsaken,
For my only love was taken,
please take me now,
I'm not sure how,
I can live without you,
there's nothing I can do,
the pain is just to great,
you're love returned to late,
nothing left to live for,
die die and nothing more,
you hate me I love you,
Nothing left to say for nothing can I do.


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by sUbLiMe 4 2 0 (4-7-2004 - 11:41 PM)
Heyyy... i just wanted to hit you up to tell you that i thought your poem was really relatable and deep. You got some balls to put your shit out there like that... later - 1 luvv *-*Amanda*-*

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