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my love
written by devil-dick09:42 PM 8/31/04your smile, it lights the sky.
the stars, they twinkle in your eye.
your beauty, makes the flowers bloom.
your body, makes the heart stop in every room.
your talent, is known far and wide.
and for the groom, your one special bride. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
title seems cack, any better idea's?
( i have changed the other poem called my love into we all can love)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Kagome (8-31-2004 - 10:27 PM)
| I think you really have a heart for poetry adn it's great but, i think it should be called my love |
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