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» Poem: Cant give up now
Cant give up now
written by Xx brOken xX
11:19 PM 8/31/04
I'm falling apart
you're breaking my heart
i'm not gonna let you get away this easily
i've let every other guy slip away
but no, not you
you're something different
you just need to vent
you couldn't have meant those words
because you've told me many times you'd love me forever
and it hasn't been forever yet
so where are you going?
please say you'll be back
we've been through so much
we cant give up now...


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yet another bad poem....

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by blood-sane-angel (9-1-2004 - 12:37 AM)
i wonce again loved it

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