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» Poem: Too Beautiful
Too Beautiful
written by frotofski_LaVey
04:39 AM 9/1/04
im forced here
strapped in like an infant in their booster seat.
a rollercoaster of hatred and remorse
i pity the ignorant people who dwell on their incoherent lives.
My parents have no faith in what i do
no faith in what i believe
im no infidel. i just believe in myself and my abilities.
the world was once too beautiful
then came man


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by psycho_bunny (9-1-2004 - 04:50 AM)
I dont know if I am just understanding your poem wrong or what... and dont get me wrong your poem is beautiful but thats the point of this comment... look what a beautiful creation your poem is? man is not all bad... if people can make beautiful things like your poem then maybe were not so bad... I dunno... its just a thought I thought you might want to hear.

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