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You Still Dont Know
written by emo to the skibbies05:20 PM 5/15/04No one knows how i'm feeling
Laying on the ground
Staring at the ceiling
I cant here a sound
Free space for my eyes to roam
White hospital wall
No ones home
I have no one to call
I havent talked in so long
No one knows how i'm feeing
Never did anything wrong
Staring at my ceiling |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by The GoGo Machine (5-16-2004 - 07:03 AM)
| I like it, very much! I'm not sure of what else to say, and that's not very common! Great work! |
by xJiLl_suicidalx (8-24-2004 - 10:52 PM)
| Loved it. You're awesome! |
by (anonymous) (11-2-2004 - 09:26 PM)
| that was damn near the worst poetry I have ever read. You disgust me. The only thing worse than this poem was the rest of your awful trash. Try reading some good poets so you can learn what writing is about. Bukowski spits on you from hell... |
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