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Be my Angel?
written by Trapezium03:46 PM 9/2/04Wrap your wings around me,
Enclose me in the lightest sea,
A brightness brighter then white,
But a comfort like that of a night,
Will you be my Angel?
Hold me close and stroke my hair,
Please make me forget I was ever there,
Kiss me softly and tenderly caress,
Hold my face with your white silken dress,
Can you be my Angel?
Let me stare into your eyes,
I'll reveal your masked cries,
Snuggle me and rest your head on my lap,
Listen to the steady tap-tap,
Are you my Angel?
Don't fly away just yet,
Don't soar above a jet,
Stay with me forever,
Can we just be together,
Be my Angel? |
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that's a horrible romantic poem
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mystic 1 (9-2-2004 - 08:59 PM)
| no, that's a really good romantic poem
i didnt know guys could write good stuff like that.....(im guessing u r a dude) |
by i_love_sandy (9-2-2004 - 09:13 PM)
| i think its magnificent!!!!! truly beautiful!!! ur a great poet! :)......i like it, i like it lots |
by sonleef (9-22-2004 - 02:46 PM)
| that is a great romantic poem. i love it! if you want something similar please look up my work. but otherwise great stuff. i also liked Angel of Hope |
by deathcallsthysoul (12-10-2004 - 06:08 PM)
| whoa most guys hate writing romantic poems. must i know write about killing the gurlz who hurted them and caused them pain. and about hell. guess i was wrong about you. |
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