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Hooks of Cold Metal
written by frotofski_LaVey
02:31 AM 9/3/04
ripping from my insides
as it pulls on my stomach
tears of blood seep from my eyes
the stories i had heard when i was a child
never seemed so real
until i met the Big Bad Wolf
until i met music

the songs ached my head
they burnt out my heart
the pulses i felt were incinerating
and harsh

these hooks tore open my soul
and i bled and bled some more
missing nothing but the sweet taste of women

my life flickered before my eyes
i remembered being little
i remembered what being small, but not noticing
felt like


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by neuropsychotic (9-3-2004 - 02:58 AM)
your such a great poet. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Now I feel special :D Bye

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