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Crying
written by frotofski_LaVey
04:01 AM 9/3/04
im crying now as my mother dies
not in body
but in my mind
she is leaving me and leaving me blind
as wait for the nightmare to end

pinching myself, i realise im awake
kicking myself for letting our family break

i could have stopped it
but it wasnt my fault
dad never wanted to know me
he left before i was born

im only 18 now, but dead just the same
mentally unstable
drugs seem to ease me pain

"Stop your fucking whining"
"Fucking go to hell"
yelling, screaming, crying
life doesnt go too well


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by violent_screams (9-3-2004 - 04:04 AM)
your poem is sad but its good. thanks for the comment for my poem.

by Darkwolfgirl (9-3-2004 - 04:14 AM)
awesome. its sad, yeah but really really good.

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