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» Poem: your problem
your problem
written by Xx brOken xX
09:40 PM 9/3/04
would you just stop
its not getting you anywhere
so why do you do it?
all it does is make you do stupid shit
you dont even know what you're
doing when you do it
you might think it makes
things better for you
but its not helping us any
you yell and hit us
you treat us like shit
you do it to get rid of your pain
that you hold within
to get rid of all your childhood pain
that you cant let go of
well it doesn't make matters any better
it makes it worse
you're hurting us
and you dont even care
you get defensive when
we ask you to stop
you tell us to worry about ourselves
well, we are
because when you keep doing it
its affecting us
we're just trying to help you
and your problem that you deny


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is about my dad and his drinking problem...

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