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» Poem: Need you to live
Need you to live
written by whatShouldUsBe
12:06 AM 9/4/04
I used to hurt so much,
I couldn't handle the pain,
I shiver at your touch,
or at the sound of your name,
I'm sorry that I hurt you,
but you'll live,
I wouldn't know what to do,
if I had no love to give,
I can make it on my own,
I know that I'm stong,
so you can drop it leave it alone,
I know I'm not wrong,
you almost left me empty,
with no love left to give,
but I found I DON'T,
need you to live.


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I know it's not one of my best I have a lot of others but let me now what you think....

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by dead_heart (9-4-2004 - 07:34 PM)
I like this.

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