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Bleed Black
written by bleedblack07:06 AM 9/5/04my heart is so torn
from being worn
down to the point of breaking
because the medicine i'm taking
makes me bleed black
there is no turning back
in the life i lead
i may just kill myself and bleed
'till all is gone
and there is no sun
to turn my blood red
so i can be dead
and rest in peace
all will cease
to exhist at all
i have taken my fall
in this endless hole
where i have lost my soul
i will say my last words
they'll be "fuck this world!" |
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i like to get comments back on my poems ... i like to know if they're good enough for anyone
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Lovely_Suicide (9-5-2004 - 07:09 AM)
by marilyn_ramirez08 (9-5-2004 - 07:30 AM)
| kick ass poem! i truely like your work!
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by Fallen Beauty (10-8-2004 - 09:08 PM)
| nice ending. I think I like evrything I've read of yours, so far. |
by (anonymous) (12-2-2004 - 02:18 PM)
| ur poems r really good and very touchy and u write from heart and that all matters. keeping writing but without hurting urself |
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