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do i deserve this?
written by bleedblack04:38 PM 9/5/04a silent quiver
a heavy sob
a slow shiver
a painful throb
do I deserve
what I get
one last nerve
i'll never forget
it snapped in two
when you found out I cut
i said screw you
and you called me a slut
your words
cut me deep
i step backwards
as I weep
as I look
through shattered eyes
the love I took
i now despise
daddy's little girl
is what I hoped to be
now I sit and whirl
in lost memories |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this never really happened to me but i thought it was a good topic to write about ... i have a lot of friends who are like this.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by takemypain (9-5-2004 - 04:41 PM)
| omgsh that happened like EXACTLY like that to my best friend .. wow ... freaky shyt |
by blackcloud (9-5-2004 - 06:49 PM)
| awesome! really kinda expressive |
by whatShouldUsBe (9-5-2004 - 09:13 PM)
| wow........that's like exactly what happened to me...........and of course then I like it. but good job anyways. |
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