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» Poem: I did this to you
I did this to you
written by bleedblack
03:09 AM 9/6/04
all i can think is that
i did this to you.
i made you sad
think you cant get through.
i'm so lonely
i don't know what to do.
i wander in the darkness
trying to find you.
your not there.
i'm aimlessly drifting
through the unknown
constantly shifting.
i've been drained
of all my tears
losing hope
gaining fears.
i'm so scared
of life without you.
will i make it
can i get through?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
sad :(

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» Comments / Feedback
by Lovely_Suicide (9-6-2004 - 03:12 AM)
cool poem ur poems are excellent keep it up.

by DarkAngelBlood (9-6-2004 - 03:27 AM)
I really like this poem too. I think all of your work is good. ^_^

by Luminata (9-6-2004 - 04:28 PM)
nice poem...

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