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» Poem: And the Lie goes on
And the Lie goes on
written by liddle xxx punk
07:58 PM 9/6/04
Day after day i hear you say
those three little words
I say them back but I know
that you dont mean it
You get angry if i dont say it back
But how could you blame me?
We are living a lie and i want you to stop
I wish i was done playing this game...
But i like the feeling i get when you are around
But then again i dont bc i know that your love isnt true
I wish i could believe you when you say
you're not using me
its just hard to believe
After so much has happened...
I am still in love you with that much is true...
But i want out of this game bc
This isnt fair to either of us
But yet the lie goes on


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Hmm...Yep....Thats it....I dont want to voice too much of my opinion on this one....

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» Comments / Feedback
by i_love_sandy (9-6-2004 - 08:12 PM)
i can totally relate...with me and kahno.....great poem:)

by distraught_thoughts (9-6-2004 - 08:52 PM)
i have been in that exact situation.

by Xx brOken xX (9-6-2004 - 08:59 PM)
wow. that says everything about me and the guy im liking now. so im in that situation right now. it sucks. i really do wanna believe him when he says hes not using me.. but its really hard to bc of the shit that happened b4. great poem! keep it up!! :)

by dancingrooster08 (9-8-2004 - 01:40 AM)
Oh, damn. It was really good. I figured a lot of people would relate to it. It's pretty damn personal and it helps me to understand everything that's happened. Love you. erika.

by freak (11-28-2004 - 05:12 AM)
i love this poem it releats to me and now my ex boyfriend i love it but i stoped that game maybye you should too

by freak (11-28-2004 - 05:12 AM)
i love this poem it releats to me and now my ex boyfriend i love it but i stoped that game maybye you should too

by freak (11-28-2004 - 05:12 AM)
i love this poem it releats to me and now my ex boyfriend i love it but i stoped that game maybye you should too

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