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» Poem: scars
scars
written by bleedblack
08:24 PM 9/6/04
i cant believe
i've gotten this far
its so hard
with these scars
everyone
judges me
my wrists are
all that they see
not who I
am inside
they've all seen
the tears I've cried
not the emotions
that I really feel
they think the outside
is all that is real


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i dont like this poem ... please leave comments

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» Comments / Feedback
by Darkwolfgirl (9-6-2004 - 08:53 PM)
how can u not like it? its awesome. i can relate, except without the scars. they scars are my thoughts, the imaginary lines that i wish were apparent.

by distraught_thoughts (9-6-2004 - 08:56 PM)
i like it.

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