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does anyone care?
written by bleedblack08:30 PM 9/6/04this life isn't fair
i turn my back and
feel the people stare
all they tell me is that
my life will lead to nowhere
I sit here and question
does anyone even care? |
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awful poem but oh well
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Darkwolfgirl (9-6-2004 - 08:51 PM)
| awesome. it sums up how you feel in a few lines. its great. |
by distraught_thoughts (9-6-2004 - 08:57 PM)
| simple short and to the point. i write long drawn out vague things. i like yours. heh. |
by Disturbezz (9-8-2004 - 05:11 AM)
| sweed poem...do they care? |
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