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» Poem: What is wrong with me?
What is wrong with me?
written by lost_cause
11:03 PM 9/6/04
Why don't you see me?
Aren't I here?
I want you so badly...
You don't want me...
What is so wrong with me?
Why am I nothing to you?
I've been there and cared
in all you've been through...
Why am I just a glitch?
Nothing worth your time?
After how much you've hurt me
I've stayed by your side...
I want your affection...
More than my life...
If I don't get it
I fear I might die...
You are everything to me...
Almost more than I can bear...
You surround me...
Captivate me...
You are everywhere...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Not one of my best... A little forced so it is bad...

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by distraught_thoughts (9-6-2004 - 11:14 PM)
i like it

by unpure_substance (12-25-2004 - 09:03 PM)
that is such an awesome poem

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