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» Poem: I love you
I love you
written by bleedblack
01:03 AM 9/7/04
You watch as I cry
A stream of tears
I love you so much
But this is what I fear
I fear that I will hurt you
Or that I'll cause you pain
But you know that I'll always be here
When you fall again
I will always stand
By your trusting side
And make sure all your
Tears have been dried
I care about you so much
That my love has no end
Some may say that this is fake
But I know this can't be pretend
My heart always flutters and
The feelings are too strong
When you are gone
For you is what I long
I know I may get upset
And sometimes a little mad
At times you even make me cry
Then I get really sad
But I want you to always know
That in my heart there will be
A part of you there
And I will love you always


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i know its kind of mushy ... not one of my best ... but it means something to me .. please leave comments

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» Comments / Feedback
by gothic_hobo1 (9-7-2004 - 02:16 AM)
verry nice.... i liked it

by smile_inc (9-20-2004 - 01:43 AM)
Very nice! I loved it. I need to read it again. :) I think this is my favorite poem of yours, so far... :)

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