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Rain
written by bleedblack11:58 PM 9/7/04please don't rain on me this time
don't ruin this calm nightime
its the only time i sit in peace
the quietness will decease
when the rain starts to shatter my deep thoughts
ruptures the night as would a gunshot
mind so confused
thoughts are refused
this dusruption causes me pain
i can not think with this rain |
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this poem sucks .. but please leave comments anyways
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| » Comments / Feedback | by frotofski_LaVey (9-8-2004 - 02:38 AM)
| IT DOESN'T SUCK THAT BAD
i like it, emotional |
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