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» Poem: Push me down
Push me down
written by bleedblack
12:15 AM 9/8/04
i hate how you hold me down
you push me under, make me drown
its said that i'm better than this
but how can i help it, you call this bliss?
your the ones who made me this way
i hate you and thats all i can say
you tell me to be perfect, i try my best
you expect the best, and nothing less
i cannot perform what you want
why am i who you taunt
i cant help but be me
cant you just love me... cant you see
i try so hard to meet your standards
then you push me down you damn bastards
nothing is good enough for you
whats done is done, i cannot undo
just remember when i die
you are the reason i committed suicide


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by Disturbezz (9-8-2004 - 05:05 AM)
Great poem... :)

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