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The wilting rose in the bottle
written by Lovely_Suicide09:40 AM 9/9/04A Big red rose i placed in this bottle
Added with it love and care
I watched it blemish everyday
Watched the beauty day by day
One day i started to neglect it
One day turned into a week
Then a month
I never saw how sad the rose was
Petals falling down into the bottom of the bottle
Brown and crumbled
The rose crying tears of pain and sadness
Eventually the rose did die
The flower died from my lack of carness
My luck of love
I finally noticed when it was gone
I felt so awfully for my poor little rose that is gone because of me. |
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