ZENHEX.COM



Not logged in [Login - Register]
Go To Bottom


» Poem: guyz are confusing
guyz are confusing
written by Lovely_Suicide
09:53 AM 9/11/04
Three guys
One funny and brave
One sweet and gentle
One caring and kind
I loved each one
Even though they were on the computer
I still fell for them
But each one i lost over something so stupid
First was from a silly little fight
Second one just because i said i wanted to die
Third one only last night just cause i confessed i liked him
I'm still confused and hurt
My heart broken into little bits
I'll try never to fall again
Unless someone trips me.


All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.

Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i've had a broken heart on real guys its just these i actually got to know

[ View Lovely_Suicide's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]

This Poem has been viewed 350 times


» Comments / Feedback
by maledeth (9-11-2004 - 09:55 AM)
You say you can't understand my poems? Yours are so...literal....maybe?

by maledeth (9-11-2004 - 09:55 AM)
You say you can't understand my poems? Yours are so...literal....maybe?

by maledeth (9-11-2004 - 09:56 AM)
You say you can't understand my poems? Yours are so...literal....maybe?

by maledeth (9-11-2004 - 09:56 AM)
Sorry, I left three comments there...what in the bloody hell?!

» Poetry Menu


»All Types
»Allegory
»Ballad
»Ballade
»Black Verse
»Canzone
»Cinquain
»Couplets
»Diamante
»Dramtic Monologue
»Dramatic Dialogue
»Eclogue
»Elegy
»Epic
»Free Verse
»Haiku
»Hymn
»Limerick
»Lyric
»Narrative
»Ode
»Pantoum
»Pastoral
»Rondeau
»Rondelets
»Roundel
»Satire
»Sestina
»Sonnet
»Tanka
»Triolet
»Villanelle


The system has failed to process your request. If you're an administrator, please set the DEBUG flag to true in config.php.