| » Poem: The line of suicides |
The line of suicides
written by Lovely_Suicide02:41 AM 9/12/04People that die because of pain
Pain left behind for the victims
Not being able to continue on
Bang, Slit, Smash
A suicide
Another victim
Weak to the knees
Tears falling onto the ground
Blood pourng from open veins
Drip, Drop, Drip
Another suicide
Third victim
Has already got a bad life now its worse
Already started cutting now cutting deeper
Swallowing gasoline
Setting themselves alight
Fire, Burn, Fire
Third suicide
Fourth victim
Was on the verge of suicide
Now drawn right under
Drowing in this bath water
Splash, silence...........silence
Another suicide
Fifth victim
Dosn't notice
Dosn't care
To wrapped up in themselves
Laughter, Smiles
This is not another suicide.
The continuesh lines of suicides broken. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (9-12-2004 - 02:49 AM)
| ur freakin "poem" freakin sucks u freakin freak um......freak! |
by drowninginmyblood (9-12-2004 - 05:25 PM)
| to (annonymous): Your a "freakin freak!" I really liked your poem, and that this annonymous is an idiot that has no apreciation of poetry at all. If people don't like dark stuff then they need to get the hell of this site!
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