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» Poem: She broke my heart, so I broke her jaw
She broke my heart, so I broke her jaw
written by Mars_Phoenix
06:39 PM 9/12/04
She broke my heart so I broke her jaw.
As her words split, stretched out her finger tips,
Taking me in her sensual lips they kiss,
And twist my heart and tear it out with a flip of her wrist.
I jerk and run and try to kick,
But from the start she tried to trick
Me into her web,
Im tangled im stuck,
Used me just so she could fuck.

She fucked me and used me and changed me still,
Though I wouldn't listen my friends always will.
At least thats what I knew till she tore that in two,
And took my best, my most treasured and true.

I look on them now as they cross the floor,
My voice, he won't listen, he's deaf to truth,
It hurts that she tore this brother from me,
Nothing I could do would make him see,
He's blind to her tricks,
He just wants his fix.

Of her lips and of her hair,
He'll fuck her here and there,
Every day till she's used him good,
He'll be her little pet like every good boy should.

But he's my friend you whore you slut,
I'll make you pay for every day,
You took from me and made me pay,
In Blood, In Sweat, In Tears, In Time.
I'll beat your name into my fist,
So I'll never forget the chance I missed,
To break your spirit and take your friend,
And cut her heart into pieces to send,
Them back to you wrapped in little pink paper,
You bitch, my soul you took you raped her.

Silence.

This year I've learnt to live without the lie,
Without just sex, this time in love i'll try,
To find the answers to find my part,
For that girl i'd give my heart.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
"I broke her heart so she broke my jaw" i heard it from something...so i felt like i had to write up my own story. But I switched the "her" and "I" around.

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» Comments / Feedback
by spoonsrock (9-12-2004 - 10:09 PM)
i love your poem. i think it really gets the point around ya know. good good. you rock. you're better than waffles!!! (thats good)

by Lost_In_Darkness (9-12-2004 - 11:38 PM)
This is really good u sound like someone whos very passionate about their writing.U should U2U me sometime:)

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