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» Poem: He doesn't see me
He doesn't see me
written by The grey raven
09:38 PM 9/16/04
Maybe it was a waste of time,
maybe it wasn't
who will ever know?
I do
if i see him again, then I know it wasn't
if i don't, thats too bad
he dosen't see me
he only sees the shell
I just don't know
why can't he see me
Why......
why......
I am now a ghost of my former self
Why can't he see
Soon, all I will have is hope
hope that he will see me


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is about a guy i fancied but he just didn't realize it. Just thinking about is brings me close to tears.

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by CLC_RockGirl (10-26-2004 - 02:07 PM)
oooo so sad keep it up thats realy good

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