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» Poem: take me away?
take me away?
written by NirvanaGirl23
04:08 PM 9/18/04
you say "i want to take you away"
but then you find someone else and it seems like, you never felt that way.
You know you dont love her, you know you dont want her
but she is so god damn pushy with you, it seems like you want her.
so "take me away". bring me to you.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
hmm...well, lets see...this poem is more about like when a guy says he loves you one minute, then the next, he acts like he doesnt know you or your name, like your forgotten or something....i dunno..LEAVE COMMENTS!

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» Comments / Feedback
by music_writer_chick (9-18-2004 - 04:52 PM)
It always has been and always will be like that with the majority of guys. Once in a blue moon you find someone that actually cares. Gr8 poem

by Xx brOken xX (9-18-2004 - 07:01 PM)
yup i have a guy right now.. i swear he has like a split personality. . . he'll be liking me and saying sweet things to me and then the next time i'll talk to him, he's bitching at me and saying he doesnt like me.. he's confusing.. so yeah i understand ur poem. good job. :)

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