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Awake the Nightmare
written by EvilTiger09:39 AM 9/19/04When the life is in ruin,
When condemnation is cruel,
I feel no meaning of truth,
I feel failure of self,
Solitary confinement is torture,
Solitary confinement makes it worst,
This demon is a beast out of contral,
This demon is hatred for mankind,
Eternal roer,
Eternal breakdown,
Deepen the cut,
Deepen the thought,
To be called crazy,
To be called th devil,
Bring these murky thoughts,
Bring this disease to life,
Awake the evil spirt,
Awake the nightmare,
Now you wish you didn't say anything at all. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by genuinely_fake (9-19-2004 - 11:10 AM)
| OK THEN.....THIS POEM IS VERY DEEP BUT, LIKE, TAKE A CHILL PILL DUDE!!! |
by Illuma (9-19-2004 - 01:39 PM)
| nice. very nice. It would be a little better if you gave it more rhythm but other wise, NICE WORK!. |
by Darkwolfgirl (9-19-2004 - 07:09 PM)
| awesome poem. you shouldn't change a thing. its your work and i love it as it is. |
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